Really great song! I read your description and imagined your idea as the song progressed. I hope someone uses this song and your idea to make a cool series. One idea (if you don't mind) is you should add an air raid siren sound from 1:36-ish to the beginning of the breakdown/drop; if you make it loud at the start, then fade it away into the drop it would sound really cool!!
Keep up the good work!! 5/5
GC117